Sweet sea. I walk to the sand, feel that twinkle on my toes. The nice sweet air going past. The sign on the sea. Nice feeling in your toes from the sea. That nice sun shine on your back.
Your poem gave me flash backs of the fun times I have had at the beach during the summer. You have used a range of descriptive words that have helped me remember what it feels like to be at the beach. I can't wait to go back when the weather warms up again! A little challenge you can work on is finding other words for 'nice' as you use it a lot in this piece of writing.
Ka pai to mahi Manaia! I have enjoyed reading this blog post.
Hi Manaia,
ReplyDeleteYour poem gave me flash backs of the fun times I have had at the beach during the summer. You have used a range of descriptive words that have helped me remember what it feels like to be at the beach. I can't wait to go back when the weather warms up again! A little challenge you can work on is finding other words for 'nice' as you use it a lot in this piece of writing.
Ka pai to mahi Manaia! I have enjoyed reading this blog post.
Miss Logan